Misc Blog · Work In Progress

Allowing Characters to be Fools (WIP) It Chose Three

I’m not going to put every new or revised scene on here, but I find it very helpful to get some of the “bigger” ones out where people are commenting. I also have come across a new roadblock I was having before: allowing my characters to be fools. I only have one cringe-worthy scene with… Continue reading Allowing Characters to be Fools (WIP) It Chose Three

Misc Blog · Work In Progress

“It Could Be Worse” WIP It Chose Three

As I continue to reprocess what happened, more things are surfacing. I am learning to turn it right back around and put it into scenes. It’s no surprise “it could be worse” showed up. “It could be worse” is a special kind of guilt that we can lay on ourselves and/or others can lay upon us.… Continue reading “It Could Be Worse” WIP It Chose Three

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(WIP) “Peter, Peter” – Introducing Scarlett

During the first revision of this short story, even before I changed the perspective of the story from third-person limited to Wharty’s view to first person limited to Wharty’s view, I was stuck after I introduced Scarlett. For those of you who don’t know the nursery rhyme, it’s dark (because why not?) and Peter “had… Continue reading (WIP) “Peter, Peter” – Introducing Scarlett