Continuing the edits I am making to my short story (London Bridge is) “Falling Down,” I have been working in the layer of singing. Another very important element I was missing from the version I sent for critique was my protagonist only sings the little song she makes up (my version of this origin story… Continue reading Addition to “Falling Down”

Lately I received some amazing feedback on two of my Steampunk short stories and I have been working to edit them. I will show you progress on (London Bridge is) “Falling Down.” Two of the things that came from the critique were: 1) I had left the husband out too much for him to play… Continue reading Edits for “Falling Down”